tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36438728.post6448319505563479168..comments2023-09-10T03:29:29.092-07:00Comments on THE SOJOURN: CleanlinessTrishahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15422728638748583885noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36438728.post-57203759893812303002011-05-03T12:07:52.601-07:002011-05-03T12:07:52.601-07:00thanks madhumathi :)thanks madhumathi :)Trishahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15422728638748583885noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36438728.post-82845082609764306412011-04-26T03:51:20.088-07:002011-04-26T03:51:20.088-07:00Wow, thats awesome poem. Good concept.. :)Wow, thats awesome poem. Good concept.. :)Defianthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15465203377322791514noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36438728.post-72678633723026405662011-04-25T09:11:40.273-07:002011-04-25T09:11:40.273-07:00thanks @the xeno. I deliberately did not want to m...thanks @the xeno. I deliberately did not want to make it rhythmic.it would have interfered with the intensity of the poem.<br /><br />thank you so much @ UBTrishahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15422728638748583885noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36438728.post-87425018743789990142011-04-24T21:06:31.344-07:002011-04-24T21:06:31.344-07:00Lovely!Just lovely!Lovely!Just lovely!UBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02049980391439882281noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-36438728.post-70166423093305688882011-04-24T16:59:01.987-07:002011-04-24T16:59:01.987-07:00Its a nice poem.
But i feel that a bit of rhythm i...Its a nice poem.<br />But i feel that a bit of rhythm into it might make it sound better.The Xenohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06484032110087362354noreply@blogger.com